fan fiction

I'm trying out Dragon Ball What ifs. My style is very narrative focused. Part one has two versions; one using TTS and the other using my voice. It would be very helpful if you tell me which you prefer. Note that I made mistake with the edits to my voice and it would sound somewhat better better...

1. What if Team 7 meets Suiren, and Junsai similar to the Demon Brothers. Then they meet Mei Terumi, and Ao (but he wears a mask similar to Haku but a little bit different.)? 2. What if Naruto becomes the Dimensional Guardian? Where he watches other-dimensional counterparts of himself married...