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Here is some artwork for the title character in my fanfic. These two I'll be sharing are a bit of a preview to the story as they show a 20 year old Korian in his different forms. Original artwork by the artist Salvamakoto.



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I've only read a fraction of the fanfic, but I like where you're going with it!

I love the artwork to, great looking Saiyan, and a strong looking Super form. It'll be interesting to see where this character goes!
 
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I decided to give everyone another teaser picture. It's coming up in the story and it's not too much of a spoiler. Also, please feel free to use this thread for questions, comments, or concerns relating to the artwork or the fanfic itself. Feedback is always appreciated!
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I posted a preview of Part 4 in the main thread for the story. I'm hard at work on the rest of the first few chapters. Part 4 is going to be a long one so I appreciate your patience and support as I eschew all adult responsibility and work on this story like an obsessed maniac. Enjoy!
 

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The next chapter of Part 4 is up! After completing the story please feel free to check out the relevant artwork below.

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Greetings, Korian fans! Conclusion of Part 4 is now online. Please enjoy the attached artwork which plays a big role in the story. As always please feel free to comment right here in this thread and I hope you all enjoy!

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Just realized that all the artwork up to this point in the story has been released so now would be a good time to share music video of Korian's theme songs courtesy of HalusaTwin. Enjoy!
 
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Chapter 1 of Part 5 is now available. We've reached the part of the story I have been dreading the most and that is hitting the Dragon Ball Super timeline. Most of us know what happens to some of our characters and I hope I managed the story well enough to keep things within the lines so to speak. No spoilers please for anyone who isn't up to date on the manga, dubbed, or subbed iterations. While there are differences in the story that unfolded in these mediums, that is not my story to tell so use your imaginations as you see fit. Attached is another piece of artwork by the supremely talented Salvamakoto which occurs at the beginning of Age 780. Enjoy!

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I've decided to give a few behind the scenes facts about the story and some of the characters in question for those interested. So you may ask why name the Saiyan character Korian? Well, Korian is a pun for coriander also more commonly known as cilantro. It's in the same plant family as parsley which is where we get Parserii, his mother. Korian's father being named Kabo comes from Kabocha which is Japanese for pumpkin. Our spunky half Rabbit person/half Saiyan, Shihori, comes from the Japanese phonetic pronunciation of Sea Holly. More specifically, the Amethyst Sea Holly which is in the same plant family mentioned above. Kitsune is Japanese for fox.

Most of the planet names are short hand from Spanish words. Korian's homeworld of Pas is for Paz meaning peace because it was a peaceful time. Adopted home of Basur for Basura because Universe 9 was called trash. Metius draws a connection to Adriaan Metius, a Dutch astronomer, I wanted some connection to space since it was their first time venturing out. Verted for Vertedero which is a Dump a direct call back to Bergamo of the Trio de Danger calling Universe 9 a dump. I hope you all enjoyed these few behind the scenes facts and please do stay tuned for more story!
 

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Chapter 2 of Part 5 is now up. Plot twists and explosive action! Enjoy!

P.S. I apologize to anyone who reads this chapter and thinks "How could you?!" about what happens to Sorrel. That's my waifu so it was like destroying a piece of my humanity. Keep your fingers crossed.
 
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I usually like to let people use their imaginations and insert their own music into various scenes for dramatic effect. In my mind this is the BGM when Korian makes his presence known during the finale of Part 5, Chapter 2. I'm just too nostalgic.
 

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What a crazy ride, the final Chapter of Part 5 is now complete. From beginning to end it was a rewarding and emotionally draining experience. I'm glad I could share it with people who appreciate it. I'll be taking a little break to work on what comes next and to let everyone who hasn't read the story thus far play catch up. I can't wait to see what comes next! I'm including a little bit of final scene music to bring us to a close.

Music begins to play when Shihori is packing to leave in her room.

 

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Since we're going to be entering into a completely new chapter in the story I find it fitting to have some more music as closing credits for this chapter. Cover of an amazing song by my friend Halusatwin.

Shihori's song

 

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New artwork relative to the story. I feel Salvamakoto knocked it out of the park yet again!

Korian training his newly acquired god Ki with Mojito as in Part 5, Chapter 2
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Let's keep it going! I'm excited for everyone to check it out but make sure you read the story in the thread The Saiyan of Two Universes.

Super Saiyan 2 Shihori and Sorrel versus Mira. A climactic showdown!
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Continuing the story with new artwork from Salvamakoto.

Mira has knocked Shihori down for the count and turns his attention to Sorrel who stands defiant to defend her daughter. She suffers his brutal wrath and is grievously wounded.
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